FORESEE:
This story is an absolute fiction put on with an inspiration from a few real lives. Dorothy Mchanze is just like any other normal teenager with dreams and aspirations . She always knew what exactly she had to do , she was the prettiest of all and most accurately said to be the perfectionist until one day she finds fascinated by someone . she loses her confidence and the miss "perfectionist attitude" just to make him fall for her. meanwhile something else was eating her away.
"FALLING DEEP" is an absolute thriller with a few touches of romance and emotions. All the words and situations are well thought and put through in finely. Its a story inspiring enough and feels so intimately connected to any normal teenager.
I write this not only because of my passion towards literature but also to let people know of a few situations that every teenager might be prone to face.
While you continue with the story you will realiSe a few of the things and may be feel like this has happened in yOUr lives too.
and I will be really happy to make you feel that the story is all about you or someone close to you.
Navina Reddy
THE LEAD :
Dorothy felt like she was passing through the beautiful ecstasy called heaven. She walked through the meadows , ran all over banks of the river , raced on white unicorns and talked to the fairies. and shouted on hill top views. ( well well i know that looks so fairy tale like but let me remind you that our protogonist spent a perfect girly childhood. so that accounts to it. )
Somewhere in between all this Dorothy could hear some lady shrieking.On a keen observation she felt that some lady of age mid 50's was shouting may be for help , but no she was shouting with anger.
"Oh no! God I would have been late " Dorothy said to herself waking from the magical dream. She got out of her bed and started spreading her sheets. When she felt it was tidy enough she turned back and smiled.
"Oh no! God I would have been late " Dorothy said to herself waking from the magical dream. She got out of her bed and started spreading her sheets. When she felt it was tidy enough she turned back and smiled.
"Good morning geeko" Dwaine is younger brother of Dorothy and the best destructive site of the world for just 13 year old boy. He wishes her morning and enters her room . Dorothy doesn't stop smiling and replies "morning,don't you think it's too early , you got up so soon?
" facebooking so early. what is it with you and social networking sites?"
"eh! you won't understand sissy miss, it makes me stay popular in my school"
"you mean all your friends are on the networking sites?"
"yes they do! aah come'n even Ms.Evans posts our assignments which are to be done. everyone is active on facebook ."
"OMG! what exactly is happening with the education system over?"
"done"
"you updated your status as 'aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh'? what exactly are people going to understand from it?"
"well thats your mistake , you were the one who made me feel so when i was updating my status."
Dwaine just like every other kid was fascinated by technology and internet. The very first time he learn't about internet and social networking sites , what they could do he couldn't believe it .Their mother was too strict regarding their routines and habits she never allowed Dwaine to set his eyes on the computer till he was 9.(I should say she did fail to stop his curiosity though)
Dorothy's mother had to sacrifice a lot and do all kinds of odd jobs to raise her children. She was a single mother with the kids so young and innocent abandoned by a man whom she trusted her whole life with It was brutal the way how her husband has left her all alone on the streets with the kids. All through the dark she had to make a way walk on unknown roads ,just to reach a place she thought she could make a living. But all she faced was their no for an answer as no one was ready to provide work for a lady with three kids who needed baby sitting.She never backed down, she worked and bought them up so well.
Talking about the three kids you already know two of them and the third and eldest one is "Eric Mchnzee". Probably the most popular kid ever in their college and an incredible combination of greek charming and a studious nerd. The guy is just waiting to happen.
He lives miles away from his home and returns only during the vacations.
"Its been long enough I think you should sign out." Dororthy fully dressed up for the day. Wearing bright and elite as always.
She din't need a lot of time to prepare herself though , she isn't the one for going for cosmetics. She seems to look elegant and hippy at the same time with her not-so-glossy hair.
"going"
"shouldn't you be worried about doing your homework instead?"
"worried ? that should be you. because i've my girl friends who would do that for me"
"you are making them do your homework? you wanna explain that for me?"
"well they wanted to"
"and how exactly have you become so good with girls?"
"all with the grace of me"
"yeah certainly! who am I kidding.girls must be all over you for your non chalantly tacky posts and status updates.. and yeah you should try putting up a picture of yours in your pyjamas the next day with you sucking your thumb, that will help you in getting more of your fans"
"you do that"
"now get off my bed"
Dwaine jumped out of her bed and pulled of the sheets , threw them up in the corner and ran off to his room.
"Mom, dwaine pulled off the sheets off my bed"
(sarcastically)"again? forget it anyways. pack your lunch and Dwaine's too ,you will be getting late"
"okay mom"
MEANWHILE ,
Eric has been waiting out since an hour , waiting for his girl friend . (well he should be , cuz she was all blooming )
He has planned to take her out , probably her most favourite place but not his.Atlast when katlyn comes walking down the steps he goes to her takes her in his hands and walk to the vehicle together.
Katlyn can be called an etiquite person. She is the best dressed and most looked up to in her college or even in her family.
She always had the attention that whcich was never hard to get.
She is that kind of girl who maintains a clique and yet starts wandering of with others.
Atfirst it was hard for Eric to get to know about her. She was confusing to understand and equally not that easy to know her.
Today she dressed up in a white shirt and a black contrasting tight pant and red glittery pumps which made her look like a girl pop-star giving live concert.But still she looked perfect for the plan.
They bash up along the way together on Eric's bike. It was late evening and the cold was all creeping and dense.
Eric pulls off in front of "NJ LIVE" . They were certainly late , late enough for the concert has started an hour ago and they did miss their favourite band playing katlyn's favourite song.
They get down the bike after he parks and walk towards the entrance gate.It was closed and and there was no other way around.They looked around to see if they could get in somehow,
and all Eric could think was getting in through the back.So he pulls off his jacket and puts it on katyln to cover her up .Then he walks along the wall saying her " you just wait here Kate, I'll be right back."
Kate gives him a smile and swooshes him towards his way.A few minutes later Eric returns smiling naughtily and ushers Kate to walk towards him.As she does he pulls her closer to him, Kate could see his eyes flaring up, she never noticed his eyes were so "telling". They were black and majical but she couldn't understand the weariness in his eyes which dominated his resolute eyes.
She breathes in heavily and says "seems like I am being taken back, are I?"
Eric looks down to her feet and smiles looking at them. Wondered, kate asks him why he was laughing because it made her think there was something wrong with her shoes.
Eric laughs and says " oh ! sorry honey but i think you should get off those shining shoes of your's if you don't want to miss something special."
Kate certainly din't expect a surprise waiting over for her when she even doubted if she could get what was planned.She immediately takes off her pumps and holds them in her right hand and both together walk towards a wall , which seemed higher than the wall near the entrance. There was no way even if Kate could jump over the wall even if Eric helps her. Realizing that Eric goes to the nearby car and pushes it forward into the dark, the slope made it easier for him to move the car forward.
He then helped her get on the car and climbed up on to the top ,
they were facing the wall and could hear the voices of the band.
Kate was certainly thinking that it was the backsatge and she loved the thought of may-be-meeting the singer. They look at each other and spread that evil smile on their lips and nod their heads at once to each other that they were ready to do this.
" facebooking so early. what is it with you and social networking sites?"
"eh! you won't understand sissy miss, it makes me stay popular in my school"
"you mean all your friends are on the networking sites?"
"yes they do! aah come'n even Ms.Evans posts our assignments which are to be done. everyone is active on facebook ."
"OMG! what exactly is happening with the education system over?"
"done"
"you updated your status as 'aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh'? what exactly are people going to understand from it?"
"well thats your mistake , you were the one who made me feel so when i was updating my status."
Dwaine just like every other kid was fascinated by technology and internet. The very first time he learn't about internet and social networking sites , what they could do he couldn't believe it .Their mother was too strict regarding their routines and habits she never allowed Dwaine to set his eyes on the computer till he was 9.(I should say she did fail to stop his curiosity though)
Dorothy's mother had to sacrifice a lot and do all kinds of odd jobs to raise her children. She was a single mother with the kids so young and innocent abandoned by a man whom she trusted her whole life with It was brutal the way how her husband has left her all alone on the streets with the kids. All through the dark she had to make a way walk on unknown roads ,just to reach a place she thought she could make a living. But all she faced was their no for an answer as no one was ready to provide work for a lady with three kids who needed baby sitting.She never backed down, she worked and bought them up so well.
Talking about the three kids you already know two of them and the third and eldest one is "Eric Mchnzee". Probably the most popular kid ever in their college and an incredible combination of greek charming and a studious nerd. The guy is just waiting to happen.
He lives miles away from his home and returns only during the vacations.
"Its been long enough I think you should sign out." Dororthy fully dressed up for the day. Wearing bright and elite as always.
She din't need a lot of time to prepare herself though , she isn't the one for going for cosmetics. She seems to look elegant and hippy at the same time with her not-so-glossy hair.
"going"
"shouldn't you be worried about doing your homework instead?"
"worried ? that should be you. because i've my girl friends who would do that for me"
"you are making them do your homework? you wanna explain that for me?"
"well they wanted to"
"and how exactly have you become so good with girls?"
"all with the grace of me"
"yeah certainly! who am I kidding.girls must be all over you for your non chalantly tacky posts and status updates.. and yeah you should try putting up a picture of yours in your pyjamas the next day with you sucking your thumb, that will help you in getting more of your fans"
"you do that"
"now get off my bed"
Dwaine jumped out of her bed and pulled of the sheets , threw them up in the corner and ran off to his room.
"Mom, dwaine pulled off the sheets off my bed"
(sarcastically)"again? forget it anyways. pack your lunch and Dwaine's too ,you will be getting late"
"okay mom"
MEANWHILE ,
Eric has been waiting out since an hour , waiting for his girl friend . (well he should be , cuz she was all blooming )
He has planned to take her out , probably her most favourite place but not his.Atlast when katlyn comes walking down the steps he goes to her takes her in his hands and walk to the vehicle together.
Katlyn can be called an etiquite person. She is the best dressed and most looked up to in her college or even in her family.
She always had the attention that whcich was never hard to get.
She is that kind of girl who maintains a clique and yet starts wandering of with others.
Atfirst it was hard for Eric to get to know about her. She was confusing to understand and equally not that easy to know her.
Today she dressed up in a white shirt and a black contrasting tight pant and red glittery pumps which made her look like a girl pop-star giving live concert.But still she looked perfect for the plan.
They bash up along the way together on Eric's bike. It was late evening and the cold was all creeping and dense.
Eric pulls off in front of "NJ LIVE" . They were certainly late , late enough for the concert has started an hour ago and they did miss their favourite band playing katlyn's favourite song.
They get down the bike after he parks and walk towards the entrance gate.It was closed and and there was no other way around.They looked around to see if they could get in somehow,
and all Eric could think was getting in through the back.So he pulls off his jacket and puts it on katyln to cover her up .Then he walks along the wall saying her " you just wait here Kate, I'll be right back."
Kate gives him a smile and swooshes him towards his way.A few minutes later Eric returns smiling naughtily and ushers Kate to walk towards him.As she does he pulls her closer to him, Kate could see his eyes flaring up, she never noticed his eyes were so "telling". They were black and majical but she couldn't understand the weariness in his eyes which dominated his resolute eyes.
She breathes in heavily and says "seems like I am being taken back, are I?"
Eric looks down to her feet and smiles looking at them. Wondered, kate asks him why he was laughing because it made her think there was something wrong with her shoes.
Eric laughs and says " oh ! sorry honey but i think you should get off those shining shoes of your's if you don't want to miss something special."
Kate certainly din't expect a surprise waiting over for her when she even doubted if she could get what was planned.She immediately takes off her pumps and holds them in her right hand and both together walk towards a wall , which seemed higher than the wall near the entrance. There was no way even if Kate could jump over the wall even if Eric helps her. Realizing that Eric goes to the nearby car and pushes it forward into the dark, the slope made it easier for him to move the car forward.
He then helped her get on the car and climbed up on to the top ,
they were facing the wall and could hear the voices of the band.
Kate was certainly thinking that it was the backsatge and she loved the thought of may-be-meeting the singer. They look at each other and spread that evil smile on their lips and nod their heads at once to each other that they were ready to do this.
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